UNTITLED
Kristell
Sometimes I wonder did you really care or if you thought of me when I wasn’t there.
Sometimes I wonder did your thoughts ever say or think my name,
Or if I was invisible from the start.
Did you enjoy that hour of breaking my heart
Or did you regret it in the end?
Did you once ever think of others feelings
Or did you ignore it all?
Do you realize how sick I am of dealing with all this pain,
Or did you enjoy causing it all?
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8 comments:
i really like this. i can relate to the words, it brings up my old emotions.
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Kristell,
This is a really good poem. I think at one point in our lives we wonder what other people were thinking when they hurt us. I still have an ex-boyfriend I wonder about and I wonder if he ever wonders about me.
Lesli
I'm sorry that you feel this way. I've been through this many times... And I wish that boys understood the pain that they cause sometimes. I guess it's just the age huh? I bet you can get another guy easy. You sound like you're really passionate about your feelings, anyone would be lucky to have you. Great writing!
~Rachel
kristell
i really enjoy reading your poem it made me think a lot about my past. thanks
Alicia
Hey best friend pain is only as great as you make it stay longer. if that made sense. but anyways pain ends when you want it to.
Courtney
this is really good. Not too long ago i could have related to what you are saying...
Oscar
dang me to i wonder that sometimes to
Time would past up out mith the old so move on its hard i know its happend to me too. so your not the only one who feels like that.
BY Brent J@#?
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